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Post by CrimsonDeadly on Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:33 am

How about a rap battle game? Someone can write as many lines as they want, even one rhyme. It's pretty simple if you ask me. Let me give you an example.

Person 1:
See I'm writin' this rap, because I want to
You got a problem, what are you gonna do?

Person 2:
You can't possibly do anything to me, stupid
I don't love you, I've still not been affected by cupid

And so on. I'm gonna leave an instrumental beat but it can be changed if anybody wants to change the theme. First off, here's a nice little scary theme, stalker-ish theme. Let's see what kind of rhymes you guys have got ;P

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Is this beat scary? Good. Hope your shitting yourself.

You’re walkin home at night, it’s 12 o’clock
I’m creepin up on you, been following you around the block
Picturing what I’m gonna do to you in my head
Hahah, after I’m done with you, you’ll be fuckin' dead
I’ve got this giant mask, it’s pale as fuck
With a giant butchers knife that’s covered with blood
You should have never entered my hood
It’s a scary road down there, scarin the shit outta you
Then you got where?
See you just got buried in the ground
And if you don’t wanna die then don’t make a sound
Wait you’re buried down there, you must be dead already
Evidently, my knife is crimson redly
After I stuck it through your heart so fuckin' steadily

Oh the beat just changed looks like I need a new theme
I’ve got your mouth muffled, that way nobody will hear you scream
Keep it up bitch, you asked for this
And no, this is not a diss, you’re a pretty tight girl
Yes, tight indeed, my dick penetrating your puss
And my knife in your chest, so you better fucking hush
You’re pouring blood and you’re getting raped
And you were tight before, but now you’ve been gaped
Open, hopin’ for some help, but you aint getting any
Next time, I’ll creep on your cousin with my bently
And rape her too, with a knife in her chest, I’m crimson deadly.
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Re: Here's a game. :P

Post by Zaba on Thu Dec 16, 2010 10:13 am

Just try and rape mah cousin
i've only got a dozen
It might not be wise
Cause their all effing guys Very Happy
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Post by CrimsonDeadly on Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:17 pm

Oh my, I think you just told me what's what
I was beginning to think that your cousins were pretty hot
but, I guess they aren't, 'cause they're all fuckin' guys
But I don't give a fuck, 'cause I'm fuck as high
I mean I'm high as fuck, laying this down
While you're having an eargasm to my sound
Hahah, I have you on the ground already
But that's understandable, see,
'Cause like I said earlier, I'm Crimson Deadly.
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Post by NumberTwo on Fri Dec 17, 2010 1:05 am

Im so bored so im here to pass the time
and try my best to not spit some whack ass rhymes
im not a rapper, so this might be a disaster
In rapping im not a master im the mastermind

A predator with the metaphors im on the attack
Crimsondeadly's my prey with his corny ass raps
Only afraid of my shadow when it comes to rap battles
And if I have to i'll put the world on my back

Private jets across the world but this audemar is my time teller
I got bars for days, like a wine cellar
Not afraid of anything im far from superstitious
This is food for thought you do this dishes
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Did some experimenting with more complex rhyme schemes than the standard poetry rhyming.

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Post by CrimsonDeadly on Fri Dec 17, 2010 2:54 am

Holy crap dude that was amazing. But let me start off with a bit of a new beginning.

Last time I rapped to something slow
I had a fantastically fantastic flow
Words just, came to mind, as I spit the rhymes
And this is scary so you better check your behind
‘Cause I’m on it. I’m stalking your ass
Checkin’ each spot that you step with a magnifying glass
You’re walking through the park and I’m by the Swings
Like a shadow in the night with a pair of black wings
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Post by Zaba on Sun Dec 19, 2010 10:32 am

Your coming behind like a fat ass guy
hope your ready cause your gonna lose your mind
when you lose me thats the end
You see a white flash and your back is bent
Your butt starts to hurt and you dont know why
Next thing you see is me zipping mah fly...
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Post by CrimsonDeadly on Thu Dec 23, 2010 10:41 pm

You just got raped in the ass
Talk? I'll slit your throat with a piece of glass
This aint jackass, don't be a dumbass
This is a warning, so don't be a smartass
I just did four lines that end with ass
That makes five, I'm just so badass
That's six, time to end this tass
What the fuck is a tass?
I don't know, but it ends with ass!
I'm cold-hearted, But retarded, I'll slap you with the strat of a fucking sandle
I'll grab a knife by the blade and stab you with the handle
Grab a lit stick and smack you with the wax off the mantle
When really I could have burnt you with the fucking candle
This is Crimson Deadly speaking with a tackle
Catchin bitches like fish, stick my hook in their mouth and make em gaggle.
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Post by NumberTwo on Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:12 am

lol I bet you feel skillfull for rhyming the word ass 10 times. You're trying too hard.

Anyways, im bored again so im writing something I freestyled earlier.

Changing the beat to something more up-tempo
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I got that futuristic flow im ahead of my time
incase you didnt know my flows are never alike
always improving, like fine wine I get better with time
killin this shit dead or alive

Writers block never happens the imagination goes too far
like a rock when im rappin I always go too hard
Like Iraq its a war I happen to have a few scars
im a rockstar imagine a guy that drives new cars

And I just spit two bars of death
this is a small verse but it has a large effect
My minds too quick and its too hard to catch
Looks like I won this battle but I havent started yet

If you havent found out im not an average being
im the god of rap its not blasphemy
im at the trump international ask for me
top suite with your girl doing nasty things

Cold hearted flow, I show no mercy
Soul started to go im still me no worries
Just a new me fame fortune sold out concerts
Im not a human being im a monster

Edit: Added 8 more bars to make it 20 bars in total.





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Post by CrimsonDeadly on Mon Dec 27, 2010 8:57 pm

It took me a while to come back to that
mostly because I take my time writing raps
you constantly bring me down with it
the art is about respect, so stop with that shit

I'm new to the art so give me a little time
then I'll blow you away with a masterful rhyme
my flow is oozing out from all sides, unstoppable
"Crimson Deadly's on the mic, he's unbelievable!"

Upping the pace and adding the whack rhyme scheme
the thing don't even sound good, change the theme!
You have weird taste bro, like Lil Wayne himself
Turning this into a rap battle? Go sit on the shelf

Everybody's favourite mom is yours, she's a MELF
which stands for Mom Everyone likes to fuck
guaranteed bang. We knock her around like an ice puck
But I'm done, so there you go.
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Post by Janniesaur on Mon Jan 03, 2011 10:16 pm

I also come and go.
I have nothing so show.
Just wanted to tell you to stop watching porn ;Fury
and that I like corn. c;
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Post by CrimsonDeadly on Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:57 pm

Oh oh oh, good news! Very Happy My friend (calls himself Sin Gambit) has connections with a studio on island and we're gonna do a collab mixtape and advertise it around and stuff, and try to get with a producer, I'm gonna feature on a few tracks from the tape. Very Happy

And I'm not in the mood to rap yet, when I'm in the mood I'll post :3
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Post by NumberTwo on Mon Jan 17, 2011 6:53 am

CrimsonDeadly wrote:Oh oh oh, good news! Very Happy My friend (calls himself Sin Gambit) has connections with a studio on island and we're gonna do a collab mixtape and advertise it around and stuff, and try to get with a producer, I'm gonna feature on a few tracks from the tape. Very Happy

And I'm not in the mood to rap yet, when I'm in the mood I'll post :3

Well....your lyrics are all over the place. I can help you sharpen them before you do the mixtape if you want. Iv'e been rapping since I was 15 but I became uninterested in writing raps at 16 and started to only write songs once a month. I don't feel like writing anything either by the way o.o


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Post by .Thunder. on Sat Jan 22, 2011 1:49 am

This is pretty gay
So i'ma go away
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Post by CrimsonDeadly on Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:51 am

I'm reppin the green, while I do my gangsta lean
Crimson Deadly, I smack you with a death beam
He's a nigga from the west, and the best you ever seen
he's the Green Scream, he's better than you've ever been
They find his ass and team him, but he still kicks up all them
You don't catch him losin, he's just so chilled that he's frozen

I can't come up with anything else.
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